托福写作模板
托福写作包括综合写作和独立写作两个部分:
综合写作: 读 + 听 + 写 20min 150-225
独立写作:讨论性话题 写 30min 480
考试时间过长,做到最后的写作部分体乏心累,整理个模板供考试使用。
独立写作包括
开头段:100
两个论证段:170 + 170
结尾段: 60
开头段模板
The issue regarding 话题,in this day and age,has never failed to arouse the public concern and at the same time provoke a heated debate among individuals.
Some are inclined to be strong believers in the extreme claim that 反方观点.
Perhaps sound and attractive as their argument seems,but it can hardly bear closer analysis.
Accordingly,I,without hesitation,advocate that 个人观点 on account of the following evident reasons and examples.
开头段例. TPO 22 Agree or Disagree ?
Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom.
The issue regarding whether teachers should express their political views to students,in this day and age,has never failed to arouse the public concern and at the same time provoke a heated debate among individuals.
Some are inclined to be strong believers in the extreme claim that teachers are not allow to make their social views known to their young students.
Perhaps sound and attractive as their argument seems,but it can hardly bear closer analysis.
Accordingly,I,without hesitation,advocate that the social view from teachers plays a crucial role in the development of students on account of the following evident reasons and examples.
论述段模板
1主题句 + 2-4解释句 + 2-4例证句 + 1结论句
On the one hand, 主题句.To be more specific,解释句.This point can be better and further supported by the example from __.展开例证.Obviously,this example may inform us that 结论句.
On the other, 主题句.Precisely,解释句.I can think of no better illustration for this point than the example from __.展开例证.Apparently,we can learn from the example that 结论句.
主题句:言简意赅、只给理由、不做解释、包含题目要素和直接原因
解释句:在主题句的原因和结果中间加入因果链
逻辑链接词
连词:because, since, as, for, so
链接短语: because of, due to, owing to, thanks to, as a result of, on account of
副词:therefore, thus, hence, accordingly, consequently
三种句式结构
非限制性定语从句:分词结构;so…that/such…that结构
The competition is severe, so we have to work hard.
Because the competition is severe,we have to work hard.
Due to the severe competition, we have to work hard.
The competition is severe;therefore,we have to work hard.
The competition is severe,which pushes us to work hard.
The competition is severe,pushing us to work hard.
The competition is so severe that we have to work hard.
eg. 主题句:Studying abroad can help us to cultivate our independence
解释句:To be more specific, due to studying abroad, we have to live in such a new environment that it is inevitable for us to be far away from our parents and friends, leading to the lack of the assistance from them; therefore,when we come across problems,we have to face and deal with them on our own, in the process of which,we are bound to master some relevant capabilities and accumulate much more experience,so our independence can be undoubtedly cultivated.
例证:编造数据/虚空朋友
开头模板
This point can be better and further supported by the example from 事例
I can think of no better illustration for this point than the example from 事例
虚假数据/报告起手句式
According to a recent survey carried out by a local newspaper agency/CCTV after polling thousands of 群体, _编造的数据/统计结果_.
eg. Eighty percent of parents said their children became more independent and responsible after studying abroad.
结论句:一句话总结
Obviously,this example may inform us that __改写的主题句 __.
Apparently,we can learn from the example that __改写的主题句 __.
论证段例
On the one hand, studying abroad can help us to cultivate our independence.
To be more specific, due to studying abroad, we have to live in such a new environment that it is inevitable for us to be far away from our parents and friends, leading to the lack of the assistance from them; therefore,when we come across problems,we have to face and deal with them on our own, in the process of which,we are bound to master some relevant capabilities and accumulate much more experience,so our independence can be undoubtedly cultivated.
This point can be better and further supported by the example from a report from CCTV. According to the recent survey carried out by CCTV after polling thousands of parents, eighty percent of parents said their children became more independent and responsible after studying abroad.
Obviously, this example may inform us that independence can be cultivated by studying abroad.
结尾段模板
Considering all the reasons and examples discussed above, we can safely come to the conclusion that _改写个人观点 _,which should be definitely attributed to the two main points —— __A and B (两个语法结构相同的名词短语,用来概括两个论证段主题句) __.